Press Release Acme County Historical Society
NOW - April 26, 2021 Our Women's Suffrage exhibit is in the main museum room. OPEN HOUSE on Saturday, April 23, 2021 includes FREE Admission to the exhibit & refreshments!
Our project was funded by the Minnesota Historical and Cultural Heritage Grant! ‘Fight for Women's Suffrage’ Our exhibition explores how the fight for women’s suffrage nationwide played out 100 years ago in Acme County! This is a must see for all ages! It was written and designed by Wily E. Coyote, our Assistant Curator at the Acme Factory Museum!
Our Museum is Open Monday - Friday 10 AM - 4 PM
If you have questions about any of the above event please contact me at the Museum!
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